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Nothing I can do is good enough


No matter how hard I try,
I'll always fail in your eyes
Or in someone's eyes

I'm sorry,I couldn't silence my cries
I'm sorry you saw past my disguise
I'm so sorry for shaming you
But can you blame me for blaming you?


So I give up
I give up on trying to please you,
And I give up on lying to please you
You can shake your head in disgust,
But I won't try to appease you
Because I'm done caring how you see me
no matter how hard I try,there's always someone who doesn't think I'm good enough,so why should I bother trying?I don't give a flying fuck anymore
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Very very powerful. I LOVE it.Nice job:D
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
thanks so much (and thanks for all your comments,by the way xD I really appreciate them)
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
You're welcome:D
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lerisman2 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student General Artist
I've lately given up caring what people think as well. And let me tell you, its a lot better this way.
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011
yes,yes it is :D
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K-A-Varley Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Professional Photographer
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ookami-no-getsuei Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
"it is only after we have lost everything, that we are able to do anything." ~Tyler Durden~
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
o.o. genius quote ^^^
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ookami-no-getsuei Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
I felt that it suited the mood of your poem.
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
I feel the same way x3
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Flippygirls Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its the people that do care that matter, the ones that love u and think ur perfect
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
I guess so :) :iconhugsplz:
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Flippygirls Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but i feel like that 2 XD its easyer said, cuz i dnt beleive wat most ppl say
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Col912 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Student Writer
I know how this feels.
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
:/ kinda sucks,but at the same time I've found it to be rather freeing o.o.
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Col912 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Student Writer
I suppose if you give up on trying to please others, you get a lot of weight taken off your shoulders.
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
yep :)
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Col912 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student Writer
Mhmm.
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Chaos-Hatter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'( so sad....
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
yeah :/ thanks for commenting,though
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Chaos-Hatter Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ur welcome :)
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